Monday, September 21, 2009

elements of a fight...

your mine right?
yes im yours
your all mine?
yes ill give you all of me
your just mine?
yes no one else
your gonna let me have you whenever i want?
yes im here for you
your gonna cook for me?
yes whatever you like..i will try for you
your gonna wait for me?
yes ill wait
your gonna come see me?
yes ill get on planes and come see you

what are we gonna do?
i dont know i didnt plan anything
can we do something while im there?
your home all day you figure it out

nothing i was just hoping we could do something.
your always complaining!
im not complaining, i just want to do something with you.
im tired of this!
im not doing anything
no your pissing me off.. alway complaining
im not saying anything!?

why are you being so mean?
im not mean
your words are hurtful
i dont see how
well they are
sorry but i dont think im being mean

happy now?
youve wasted our time
you just wasted my night
we can talk im not mad
no im pissed, you wasted my night
but your wasting this time talking about time weve wasted
fuck you



Lrc said...

ouch indeed...I like how the poem is just like dialogue...fights suck

RockinMamaBG said...

Great Poem! It's so real!!! OH Man! Been there done that.... don't get me wrong tho I've been happily married for 11 years. We all hit little bumps in the road haha

littlepapoose said...

thanks guys.. this was not an actual fight between me & me hubby. but it was an actual fight in which both sides felt so strongly.. it always amazes me how what i might see as an easy call, is to some, completely wrong.